Rainbow Snippets is a Facebook Group that invites authors to post six sentences of their work each weekend. It can be from anything you like, your current WIP, a recent release, the golden oldie that even you had forgotten you had written, or just a scrap of an idea (as long as it has six coherent sentences). Nothing of your own work worth mentioning? How about a six sentence review of your favourite LGBTQ+ story.
Jack
reached to his shoulder expecting to find something, a trace of… He groaned
when he remembered the sensation of teeth on his skin as he’d come so hard, and
the feeling of being full, a body pressed against him, thrusting as he braced
himself on the wall. He bolted upright, making the cats jump from their
sleeping position at the bottom of the bed.
Realization punched him between the eyes. He’d dreamed
someone had fucked him in the shower. He recalled how good it had been, the
feeling of being full, being taken, being loved. Tears pricked at his eyes,
threatening to overflow. He hugged himself, not sure what else to do as an
incredible sense of longing and need swept over him.
This is the blurb for the story.
Raziel Slade and Jack Hastings have been best friends since Raz saved Jack’s life twelve years ago. Only Jack doesn’t remember Raz at all, and he certainly doesn’t remember falling in love with him. Now that Jack’s moved in with his university housemates, explicit dreams begin of a blue-eyed male stranger. Needing a new flatmate after his best friend moves out, Jack is introduced to Raziel Slade who has extraordinary blue eyes. Jack has no idea how to cope with his attraction to the man.
Raziel Slade has a secret – he used to be an angel. He fell in love with Jack Hastings and happily became human, but the angels aren’t prepared to let him go and steal him back. All Raz wants to do is return to his lover any way he can.
When a film brings back Jack’s memories, will he feel the same as he did when he finds out what Raz gave up for him? And are the angels finally ready to let Raziel, the Keeper of Secrets, go?
Ooh, both steamy and heartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteYep. Poor Jack doesn't understand what is happening to him.
DeleteNice. A vivid dream, or a memory? :-)
ReplyDeleteThat's the question.
DeleteHis realisation and sense of loss are very powerful. Poor guys.
ReplyDeleteThanks - Jack is overwhelmed and unsure at the same time.
DeleteOh, this is sad. I'm sorry for both of them. :(
ReplyDeleteIt is a romance so expect a HEA.
DeleteThe most heartbreaking part (I think) was that the dream left him with a memory of "being loved." It makes me think that he's lonely, and alone.
ReplyDeleteI think that's it. He gets that feeling of being loved and then wakes up and it's gone.
DeleteJust heartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteThank you. It is at that moment.
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