Rainbow Snippets is
a Facebook Group that invites authors to post six sentences of their work each
weekend. It can be from anything you like, your current WIP, a recent release,
the golden oldie that even you had forgotten you had written, or just a scrap
of an idea (as long as it has six coherent sentences). Nothing of your own work
worth mentioning? How about a six sentence review of your favourite LGBTQ+
story.
This
week’s snippet comes from A Bell Rings again. You can now get it on early
download from Pride Publishing or pre-order from Amazon. This is the sequel to
Not Every Time. Jack wakes up and has no memory of his partner Raziel, but when
he finds a new person to share his flat, there is something familiar and
unsettling about the man.
“Jack,
are you all right?”
Jack
nodded. “Just dizzy. I need caffeine and sugar.” Eyes wide, he stared ahead,
not able to do anything else. His hand itched to reach out and touch a droplet
of water which had fallen from Raz’s head and was making its way down his
chest.
Caffeine and sugar...the right fix to so many problems :-)
ReplyDeleteI get such a strong visual of the two of them watching the water, while Jack keeps sneaking glances at Raz. A very beautiful moment.
ReplyDeleteGreat description. And I could use a little caffeine and sugar myself today. (All right -- a lot of caffeine and sugar.)
ReplyDeleteNicely written - very evocative.
ReplyDeleteloved the descriptions
ReplyDeleteI'm so with Jack on the caffeine and sugar. Eh, I'm probably with him on Raz's gorgeous eyes, too. LOL!
ReplyDeleteSexy in an understated way... very nice snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the lovely comments.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! I'm urging Jack to just do it. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat description. Lovely snippet.
ReplyDeleteI love how overwhelmed he is and all the water imagery.
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