Rainbow Snippets is
a Facebook Group that invites authors to post six sentences of their work each
weekend. It can be from anything you like, your current WIP, a recent release,
the golden oldie that even you had forgotten you had written, or just a scrap
of an idea (as long as it has six coherent sentences). Nothing of your own work
worth mentioning? How about a six sentence review of your favourite LGBTQ+
story.
It's been a couple of weeks since I posted a snippet.
I’ve had visitors and knew I wouldn’t have time and, tbh, I’ve been in a bit of
a writing sulk which I’m hoping to emerge from. I do have two books out this
month – Choosing Home and Returning Home, but this snippet is from
my WIP, again set in Scotland, but in a different location. This snippet is
from the first time Connor Sinclair sees Duncan McLeod, owner of a cattle ranch
in the Highlands of Scotland. Connor is a clothes designer visiting his sister
to finalise ideas for her wedding and bridesmaid dresses, and originally from
Scotland himself, but now living in London. I wanted to write a cowboy story
with a difference so came up with this. This is a first draft.
“Now, remember be nice. Duncan’s a bit of an old
school gentleman, always polite using Sir and Ma’am. The visitors love it but
he doesn’t put it on. That’s who he is. I don’t think I’ve ever heard him say
anything rude about anyone even when he’s sorely tried. He doesn’t ever cuss or
swear either.”
Connor couldn’t wait to meet this paragon of virtue.
Did people like him really exist? The door to the house flung open and a vision
strode out. Tall, dark, and handsome, dressed in a sky blue and white plaid
shirt tucked into jeans held up by a belt with a buckle which looked
suspiciously like a highland cow. The outfit was finished off with real cowboy
boots and he carried a Stetson.
“Fuck me.” The words escaped Connor’s mouth before he
could stop them. He’d always had a soft spot for a cowboy and he had no doubt
he could give this one the ride of his life.
Currently, the WIP is at 37,000 words but there is more story to write yet so it should be over 60,000 in the end but we'll see.
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ReplyDeleteThat belt buckle, LOL. And that last line! O_o
ReplyDeleteYummy!
ReplyDeleteLOL! I love Connor's reaction. :D
ReplyDeleteOh, this looks like fun!
ReplyDeleteFun descriptions. I hope we'll get Duncan's reaction to that next week! :-)
ReplyDeleteLove Connor's reaction!
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